Rewrite the Ending

- Title: The Giraffe and the Pelly and Me.
 - Author: Roald Dahl. -
Type of Book: Adventure/ Mystery.
 - Why your ending is better: Because it paints a picture in my head and I think it is creative.
I n the last few pages I would write:
 After my friends just saved over a millions worth money of jewelry. As the Pelly saved the day by opening his amazing mouth. The criminal was armed with a gun. He was shooting inside the pellys mouth. Sadly there he was left with holes in his mouth. But that could've been replaced by putting patches to cover it. As the police we're coming the Dukes wife came down the Palace and was crying for her Jewels. She was so upset that she cried a river. As the police arrived that swooped in and Cuffed the criminal. He is the cobra which is well known for stealing. But lucky that the criminal wasn’t armed with any other weapon. In return the Duke offered the Giraffe a tree on pink and purple flowers off the tinkle tinkle tree. The monkey was rewarded a walnut tree & the pelly was offered a river filled with salmon but that was only if they kept the windows clean and they did. The boy called billy asked if he could own a grubber shop which is a sweet shop. The duke ordered every type of candy, sweets in the world. And he gave a bag of lollies to the pelly, the monkey, the giraffe and the duke. And the shop still exists now.

- By Kyra